KingDavidProductions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico's Penny Prank]

Dam Hunny

Thats some snazzy showmenship

ToonCastleTV responds:

thanks baby ;) <3

[Howto make great comments]

Welll

So basically the point of this animation was to show us a little observation about 1,000,000 + people know about already ... NOT ANIMATION WORTHY. Storyboard something great next time and the product will be better.

LazyMuffin responds:

Wow, referencing a comment I left you over 6 months ago, that really stuck with you didn't it?

To my defense, it did have a few jokes, whether or not you find em funny.

[How are ya doin.]

Serious Suggestion

Fix the perspective on the first background, the sidewalk that's vertical to the screen should be getting smaller, it would make the background have so much more depth .. as of now it looks like a paper cut out bro. But animation was good and funny, I laughed at the end even though I knew it was bound to happen, I didn't expect that! Lol - i bet you had fun with this - congrats on the trophy 2 ~

ThePrimatePunk responds:

I drew it in a few minutes, it wasn't supposed to look good at all ^_^'

[Bacon Bacon Bacon]

hmmm

anyone else hear - satan - satan???

SirReginald responds:

nope

[He stole my Lollipop!]

Idea > animation

It's true, the idea was a good one, which made the cartoon good. The animation worked, and the timing was good. I liked the backgrounds tho - and the severed arm was a nice touch. I also like the twist it was excellent. the flash was appealing the whole minute - but the characters could definitely use work along with the animation

Merol responds:

Yeah, I still have too work a looooot in my animation.
THANKS!!

[CatFat Episode 2]

I loved it

Please tell me there will be an episode 3?? =D

CatFat responds:

Yes eventually, i'm not sure when though, i really need get a job first lool.
But i plan on calling it just 'CatFat' instead of 'CatFat episode 3', for a fresher start.

[A Step-Up Hallows Eve]

lol good job

although the perspective one the backgrounds were off, the simple animation did the trick kuz it made me LOL. keep on working on the animation dude, you have solid ideas

Lanfrader responds:

Ya I need to work on that..Thanks for the review :D

[Z+G: Mischief Night]

aWeSoM3

Music from Skull monkeys !!! , good flash - funny and well done. I liked the colorful close ups they were well done and the script was well written. Only critique is there could be more frame by frame goin on homes - ya kno what im sayin?

CyborgCactus responds:

skullmonkeys was my shit back in the day. Im glad you enjoyed it!

[Brosome!]

Look Beyond he simple characters

And you can see an animators mind ! A nice funny script well played out, and the simple drawings made it even more spectacular and it worked great! obviously not the epic of the centuary but entertaining non the less - and thats the biggest ticket - bitches!

NathanDay responds:

Hey! Criticism! Thats why we have reviews! Thank you sir!

[Ransom!]

haha

Not bad man. Script for the short and timing were done well which are the two most important things! Characters could be more stylish / featurable (noses/ears) and there could be more frame by frame. But atleast the bones of the foundation of a good short were there! Keep up the good work

zigilante responds:

I definitely plan on doing more frame by frame whenever I do a next one. Thanks for your feedback.